What Not To Say in a Business Plan

July 18, 2005 by Dane | 0 Comments
In Planning

One year ago today, Barry Moltz offered some suggestions about what not to say in your business plan:

For instance, don’t say: “This business makes mechanical gasoline fueled devices used for transportation more efficient by periodically sending them through an applied for patent machine to loosen the terra firma from these vehicles to make them more conducive at performing their task.”

Instead, say: “We run a carwash.”

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